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Some extraordinary events, such as super moon, harvest moon and total blood moon.


Aris05 1  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
September 30 Black Moon Explained

Nowadays, most people are interested in Lunar phenomena as they are able to see an extraordinary event, such as super moon, harvest moon and total blood moon. On september 30, space researchers have predicted a special occasion, called black moon, is going to happen in western hemisphere. However, many people usually call this phenomenon with second new moon. It takes place when the position of lunar between earth and sun.Thus, the light of the sun cannot irradiate the earth. Actually every month just has a new moon, nevertheless there are some different phases causing some months have two new moons. When the phenomena come, people are able to see it without any risks. In some places, new moon is also become a sign of celebration such as in many Islamic countries which use it as beginning of a new year.
sinahector  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
Hi
very well-written essay

see an extraordinary events
space researchers have predicted a special occasion
... when the lunar positions (stands) between earth and sun
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without any risks
new moon has also became
RAY93 136  
Sep 30, 2016   #3
... as they are able to see an SOME extraordinary eventS, such as super moon,..
On S eptember 30, space researchers have ...
... the position of lunar IS between earth and sun.
When the phenomena comeS, people are able to see (...) in many Islamic countries which use it WHERE IT IS THE SIGN as OF THE beginning of a new year.

after read the article, I can say that you have appropriately summarized it by using your own sentences. you also made a short but quite strong summary with well-structured sentences proved by less errors that i can find. good luck on your next summaries.


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