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EXTREME ENVIRONMENT IN TAKLIMAKAN DESERT FOR PLANt LIFE (SUMMARY TASK 3)


Qaranewlagi52 4 / 8  
Sep 19, 2016   #1
EXTREME ENVIRONMENT IN TAKLIMAKAN DESERT FOR PLANt LIFE
Domination extreme environment almost eighty five percent2 in Sand Dunos make Taklimakan desert become one of extreme desert on earth and then Africa'S SAHARA.Taklimakan desert have three plants for successful the desert, they are most diverse prolific. Populus eupharaticu,tamarix ramasissma and the alhagi sparsifolia, in the vegetation area with unique coping mechanisms, their also help protect their ecosystem by stabilizing sand dunes, preventing erosion,presenting a barrier to sandstorm, and conserving biodiversity.
rosadesiana 38 / 40 2  
Sep 19, 2016   #2
hi qara,
you have done a good job, here are my suggestions

become one of extreme desert on THE earth

Taklimakan desert havehas three plants forwhich thrive successfully the desert,

Populus eupharaticu,tamarix ramasissma and the alhagi sparsifolia, (you need a verb, like "live or grow")in the vegetation area with unique coping mechanisms

theirthey also help to protect their(the) ecosystem by stabilizing sand dunes,


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