"For eyes, loser"; Introduction to bullying essay

"For eyes, loser," those are a couple of words that come out of a bullys mouth. Kids everywhere are being bullied for the way they look or act. Many kids are struggling everyday because the bullying issue has been a huge problem. In the book The Bully by Paul Langan, Darrell has to make a big change and move to a different school. Everyday he fears going to school because of being bullied by kid named Taray. Although in the end, he stands up to his bully, theres also many ways we can resolve the bullying issue today. Three things schools can do to reduce bullying among students are having more school assembilies, talking to the bullys who are bulling others, and school team.

Please state why, if you make any changes.

four eyes- spelling mistake.
there are also- grammatical mistake

You sum up everything too vaguely it seems like there is no thesis statement.

Yes, four is the number. "For" is a different word.
Use a hyphen:
"Four-eyes! Loser!" Those are a couple of words that come out...

Use an apostrophe:
... of a bully's mouth.

As one word, everyday is an adjective used to describe a noun. In this case, it is supposed to be 2 words:
Many kids are struggling every day because ...

again here:
Every day he fears ...

Spelling: ...talking to the bullies who are bullying...
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