This essay aims to provide an insight into this statement, which illustrates the writer's perspective of a partial agreement.
Is someone else other than you writing this essay? No? Then why are you referring to yourself in the third person ? Give a direct response based on a first person reference as required by the orginal reference
TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?
Respond directly and say why.
people holding the idea
Do not discuss other people's opinions. What you are required to present is what you think. Other people do not matter. This reference is a task inaccuracy in terms of discussion presentation. Everything about this essay should be presented in first person structures.
When it comes to the other hand
Why can't you refer to yourself directly? This essay will fail based on the general discussion format used. The required referencing and discussion format was not used.