A strict and immediate action is required to help prevent further spread.
Inappropriate sentence...It should not be in introduction.
With both partners working, preparing food at home becomes cumbersome so fast food seems becomes an easy option.Run-On Error
: Use comma before conjunction(and,but,so,or,nor,for,yet)
Moreover, fast food companies use misleading marketing lures kids and adults into eating fast food.that lures
The vendors provide vague information or hide important facts and highlight the taste and aromaComma Splice
: Use comma + conjunction to separate two independent sentences.
Rest is fine. Good Luck.