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The feature of wind plants and where they are applied


Abrahamlincoln 54 / 56  
Nov 30, 2016   #1
The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

The pictures illustrate the feature of wind plants and where they are applied. It is noticeable that the machine which is operated in high hill will produce higher megawatts. Meanwhile, they have the same type of equipment wherever people install them.

The wind plant consists of several importance components such as a blade, wind sensor, generator and computer. The wind generates blades are made from fiberglass or wood to rotate. As its movement, the generator starts to produce electricity almost 1.5 megawatts. Meanwhile, the wind speed and its direction are detected by the sensor which is applied to blades. The computer which is operated below wind turbine will control the movement of blades follow the wind direction.

However, the wind turbine is not only able to install in grassland but also in different places such as in coastal sea and in highland. If it is operated in top of mountain, it will produce higher amount of electricity which is 100 kilowatts

Dioba 68 / 104 7  
Nov 30, 2016   #2
Hi, there are several mistakes.

1.The wind generates causes blades arewhich made from fiberglass or wood to rotate ---improper word. the wind generate blades?

2.The wind plant consists of several importanceimportant

3.Meanwhile, the wind speed and its direction are detected by the sensor which is applied to blades. ---> no make sense, improper sentence. Logically, if you put sensor in the blades, of course the sensor also rotate and has the same movement with the blades. So, what the function of the sensor when you put sensor in the blades? correct me if i wrong.

4. If it is operated in top of the mountain,
keep writing and break a leg!
AK354 7 / 8 1  
Nov 30, 2016   #3
Hallo Lincon, This is my advice for you, hope it can help you. feel free to correction me too.

The pictures illustrate ... >> I think your introduce is better like this (The pictures show a wind turbine and it is optimal location to generate electricity from wind )

The wind plant consists of ... >> The wind turbine consist of high steel tower where all another parts are installed on it. Another parts are blades which made by fibre glass, and even wood.

When you write don't forget to write at least 150 words..
please you must reduce your error grammatical


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