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Nowadays, felling the trees is used by the industry to complete the material needed.


rosadesiana 38 / 40 2  
Sep 13, 2016   #1
SUMMARY TASK 1 ENVIRONMENTAL IMPACTS OF LOGGING

Nowadays, felling the trees is used by the industry to complete the material needed. This action leads to the deforestation and myriads of horrible impacts to the rainforest and ecosystem. To cut down the trees means cutting a numerous of plant lives as well as harm the upsides of the tree itself. The tree shades is a critical point both to the small mammal's lives and as a defend from heavy rainfall to fall directly the topsoil, beside tree leaves emit oxygen and supply a natural protector against the air pollution. Deforestation gradually eradicates the ecosystem, release the essential gain of trees, valid the use of emit oxygen and keeps pollutant airborne. Eventually, to do deforestation or reforestation is depending on the people. But every step we do to the environment will be impacting to the next generation in the future.

ichanpants89 [Contributor] 16 / 777 309  
Sep 13, 2016   #2
Hello Rosa, below are some inputs to your essay:

- To cut downCutting down the trees means cutting a numerous...
- The tree shadesshade of the tree is a critical point both to the small mammal's lives and as a defendshelter from heavy rainfall to fall directly the topsoil,.(full stop)

- besideIn addition, tree leaves emit oxygen and supply a natural protector against the air pollution.
- Eventually, to do deforestation or reforestation is dependingdepends on the people.
- ButHowever, every step we do to the environment will be impacting to affect the next generation in the future.

The above essay is good, but you need to pay attention in grammar and choosing appropriate diction as well. Hope this help. I wish that you can actively contribute to this forum by sharing your knowledge regarding writing. Cheers.
ekalamarsyari11 72 / 108 9  
Sep 13, 2016   #3
felling the trees

To cutcutting down the trees means ...

The treeshadesshade tree is a critical point both ...

EventuallyIn conclusion ,

to do deforestation or reforestation is depending depended on the people.

But every step we do to the environment ...
=>but, Every single action we do now will have an impact to the next generation in the future
Hujjatul19 45 / 70 3  
Sep 13, 2016   #4
Hello rosa. This suggest is to make your writing better.

Nowadays, felling the trees is used [done] by the industry to ...

To cut [cutting] down the trees (...) of plant [that] lives as well as harm ...

beside [that] tree leaves [also]emit oxygen (...) against the air pollution [as well].

You have lots of terms in this writing which makes it good to be read and is easy to be understood. Best regard


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