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Fiction stories are more fun than watching moveis? Agree or not?


harmeet_sunny09 1 / -  
Mar 23, 2013   #1
Que) Reading fiction such a short stories and novels, is more fun than watching motion pictures. Do you agree or disagree ?

Ans) Nowadays, there are many sources of entertainment but most people prefer to read books, novels and watch movies for entertainment. A 'fiction' is anything that is invented or imagined

by writers. i disagree to this statement and present my point of view in forthcoming paragraphs.

There motion pictures gives relaxation to people because in modern-era life is too hard to live. Besides this, movies provide more entertainment and fun in the life of humans and by watching pictures people able to know about all colors of life within a less time. Moreover, movies gives positive impact on the life of a nation and it also reveals the importance in life. There are many videos responded for spiritual and moral values and it shows the high standard of social life. Furthermore, it is a good source of spending leisure time and by watching movies people can able to understand the value of their life.

On the other hand, some people thinks that reading imaginary stories and novels is good for fun because by reading , the thinking of people becomes more stronger and creative. Moving further, people can develop their imaginary power by reading and it is a better way to know about the information. It also helps to improve vocabulary and it is more interactive medium than movies.

In a nutshell, it can be stated that there are more people who prefer to watch movies rather-than reading books and novels.

temptprovidence 8 / 163 35  
Mar 23, 2013   #2
i disagree to this statement and present my point of view in forthcoming paragraphs.

"disagree" comes with "with"

There motion pictures gives relaxation to people because in modern-era life is too hard to live.

motion pictures are a source of tranquility and relaxation for people in this modern ere of strenuous lives.

by watching pictures people able to know about all colors of life within a les s time.

by watching pictures people are able to know about all the colors of life within a short time.

it is a good source of spending leisure time and by watching movies people can able to understand the value of their life.

dont put this "and" and try to separate these two sentences.

some people thinksthat reading...

than

It also helps to improve vocabulary and it is more interactive medium than movies.

that was a plus point of yours.

In a nutshell, it can be stated that there are more people who prefer to watch movies rather-than reading books and novels.

nice ending. :)
your expression and idea is excellent. just go for improvements in grammar and sentence formation. that will be perfect. ^-^BEST OF LUCK :)


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