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IELTS TASK 1; Figures of the hamburgers annual sales of Marry


weareone_08 1 / -  
Sep 11, 2012   #1
The line graph illustrates the figures of the hamburgers annual sales of Marry
restaurant. The report will give a brief description about the main trends.

From the line graph, it is clear to see that the
Marry's annual sales of hamburgers experiences a great deal fluctuation through
a period between January and December.

To specify, from January to March the number of hamburgers consumed stablizes approximately 2000 units, followed by a plateau between March and June. Then, the hamburgers increase significantly to

reach a peak of 3000 units in August, before dropping to 1300 units in the next two months. In the rest of
the years, it sees an upward trend, ending at 1700 units in December.

In conclusion, the hamburgers consumed fluctuated annually and people seem to
enjoy them in Auturm.

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Jennyflower81 - / 690 96  
Sep 11, 2012   #2
The line graph illustrates the figures of theMarry'sannual hamburgers annual salesof Marryat his restaurant. The report will give a brief description about the mainbasic trends.

From the line graph, it is clear to see that the Marry's annual sales of hamburgers experiences a great dealfluctuatesthroughduring the

a period between January and December.

To specify, from January to March, the number of hamburgers consumed stabilizes at approximately 2000 units, followed by a plateau between March and June. Then, the hamburger sales increase significantly to reach a peak of 3000 units in August, before dropping to 1300 units in the next two months. In the rest of

the year, it seesfollows an upward trend, ending at 1700 units in December.

In conclusion, the hamburgers consumed fluctuated annually and people seem to especially enjoy them in Auturm.


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