Hi guys, I think your intro need to rework.Please, attention to task again. your introduction is not paraphrase clearly.
Some people think that families who choose private schools for their children's education should be exempted from paying taxes to State run education system. I totally disagree with this view.Let's me try:
Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Nowadays, private schools is becoming trend for some families. As such, lots of people argue that the families who bring their children in private schools should not have duties to pay charge to national education system. Whilst it is reasonable to some extent, I would argue that paying taxes are duty for every one to support high-quality of education system in country.