Finland set to become first country to ban coal use for energy
Based on Peter Lund, a researcher from university of Aalto, say Finland will become the first country in the world which prohibits coal usage for energy to anticipate climate change issues and change to the renewable energy such wind power. The Finland's council will more focus on developing of alternative energy and the council poured more than 80 million euro to enhance the capacity. It means that power plants use coal will close which provide only 8 percent from total amount of energy in Finland. Not only Finland as a pioneer, another country such as UK, Austria and Netherlands also ban coal as a raw material for their power plant in 2023. Their hope with that plan can reduce emissions and global warming.
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