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Education for children is a not simple task. Some people argue that firm discipline is effective to shape good behaviors in children while others claim that this methodology can have disaster effects on children's growth. I totally agree with the former idea.
First, it is believed that the existence of firm discipline can have negative impacts on children's growth. It is partly true that this methodology may stifle children's creativity and make them suffer inferiority complex. However, it is undeniable that no sooner have children studied the lessons of punishment than they can deeply remember their mistake, learn useful habits like punctuality and obedience, which enables them to have abilities to self control, self respect and empathy others. Moreover, there goes a saying "rule is learned to be broken" which means that only by following the rule can children learn its limitations and then creatively break it. In a word, strict penalty inculcate in kid's habits of following moral norms.
Second, opponents claim that children, due to strict punishment, are susceptible to evils in society. It is possible that children can feel no one understands and sympathies them in the sensitive period of time, which worsens the relationship between parents and children, widens the generation gap and makes them be vulnerable to evils. Nevertheless, in my perspective, it is irrefutable that in this case, children do need their parents' decisive and in time impacts to help them stay away from evils in society. Equally important, for teachers, no where can they manage their classes more effectively than in strict discipline. In addition, facts have shown that these countries, like Japan and Korea, where firm discipline has applied thoroughly have the highest numbers of self-awareness citizens and the lowest crime-rate. Put it simply, it is by virtue of firm discipline that children avoid social evils and people build foundation for a law-based society.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the implementation of firm discipline in teaching kids by virtue of their significant benefits with children's good behaviors cultivated, happy families preserved and wealthy society founded.
... that this methodology method can have disastrous effects on children's growth. I totally agree with the former idea.
* The adjective form of disaster is disastrous.
*Methodology = the study of methods. In the above sentence, just use "method."
First, it is believed that the existence the use of firm discipline can have negative...
Moreover, there goes a saying, "Rules are learned to be broken," which means that...---- :-)
... understands and sympathizes with them in their s ensitive period of time, which worsens the relationship between parents and children, widens the generation gap, and makes them be vulnerable to evils.----Very good sentence.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the implementation of firm discipline in teaching kids. By virtue of their significant benefits, children's good behaviors are cultivated, and happy families are preserved in a wealthy society. founded .
