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With the flourish of technology, working online has increasingly emerged as a new development


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Sep 26, 2021   #1

distance working pros and cons



With the flourish of technology, working online has increasingly emerged as a new development, several people choose to work at home because of its benefits and convenience. I believe that the advantages of distance working are far weightier than its drawbacks.

On the one hand, working at home may have some negative effects. Firstly, procrastinating is an example. This is because there is not anyone who forces you to work as well as supervises you. As a result, it may lead to missing the deadline or affect your productivity. Moreover, when you are at home, a lot of distractions surround you such as noise, your phone, and so on, and you cannot highly concentrate on your work as a consequence. For example, while you are working, your parents come into your room and ask you something and then you will have to chat with them.

On the other hand, the number of time that will be saved stems from working from home. For instance, instead of waking up at 7 o'clock to prepare and traveling to the workplace, now you can get up later and spend more time for yourself, let alone in traffic jams. It is researched that when the employees have more time for recreational activities, their productivity will be boosted significantly. In addition, working at home also do wonders for the environment. In light of reducing the number of vehicles, the carbon footprint releases into the air will be mitigated.

In conclusion, although distance working can have impacts on the productivity of the employee, the benefit of this trend cannot be downplayed.
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Sep 28, 2021   #2
I believe that the advantages of distance working are far weightier than its drawbacks.

The original prompt does not ask you to present an opinion. The discussion instruction requires a non-opinionated advantage V. disadvantage presentation only. A neutral discussion that offers suggestions, but not a decision or one- sided opinion to the reader. The discussion approach is incorrect this time.

your parents

Most people across the world do not live with their parents as most Asians tend to do. so there is no danger of parents walking in on a person while working. Use a more mature and westernized sample next time.

The conclusion does not meet the 2 sentence, 40 word requirement. It also offers a repeat of a single point of miw opinion in contradiction with the orginal discussion requirements.


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