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IELTS Task I : Flowchart process of academic writing


SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
Mar 7, 2014   #1
I am in my journey to write Task 1, please comment mine. Thank you

The flowchart below shows the process involved in writing formal academic essay for particular university course.

Describe the stages of the process in a reporter a university lecturer.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The flowchart below reveals the stages which should be complete in writing academic essay in a particular university course.

Generally, there are six stages should be complete to make an academic essay consecutively.

The first stage is private tutorial. This stage directs the student to take discussion about the task topic with the tutor. After that, obtaining resources such as books and articles should be done, too. The second stage involves conducting a research. Taking note in the library, giving questionnaire, conducting interview, and doing survey are the part of this stage. Next, making an essay draft is the third stage. It is necessary to plan your essay with organize the content and produce the brief outline; and also first checking for writing style and formal language usage is needed, too.

However, discussing the first draft problems and asking for further ideas suggestion are occurred in the fourth stage. Then, student should be revised the draft with read resource material again and adding the suggestion in the previous stage; also checking for quotations is required. Now, five stages have been complete. The final draft checking should be stand strictly before student submitted the final draft. It includes rewrite the final draft with carefully check the words spelling; compiled with bibliography and add title page are necessitate, consider to submit the essay before the deadline completion.




eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,195 459  
Mar 8, 2014   #2
Next, making an essay draft is the third stage. It is necessary to plan your essay with organize the content and produce the brief outline; and also first checking for writing style and formal language usage is needed, too.

I try not to use to be verb: As making an essay draft coming third stage, students should necessarily organize and produce the brief outline of the essay. Then, checking for writing style and formal language usage finally tracks the draft.
Pahan 1 / 1,907 553  
Mar 8, 2014   #3
The flowchart below reveals the stages which should be completed forin writing an academic essay in a particular university course.
Generally, there are six stages should be complete to make an academic essay consecutively.

Hey, excellent intro and overview. You are improving a lot with this task :)

The second stage involves conductingdoinga research on the topic.
I must say you have improved hell of a lot with this task. This is really cool :)
OP SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
Mar 8, 2014   #4
I try not to use to be verb

, eye!!!

You are improving a lot with this task :)

I must say you have improved hell of a lot with this task. This is really cool :)

Thank you for your appreciation, Pahan. While I read this, it is like drink two glasses guava juice after sunbathing. cheers :D
MisterWandering 18 / 321 130  
Mar 8, 2014   #5
The flowchart below reveals the stages

six stages occur and should be completed to make an academic essay consecutively.

Overall, writing a formal essay requires six stages to be fulfilled before submitting the final version.

take discussion

have a discussion

Taking note in the library, giving questionnaire, conducting interview, and doing survey emerge as the part of this stage.

Learners could take advantage of materials in the library or do fieldwork like giving questionnaires and conducing surveys at this stage.

As making an essay draft coming third stage,

The result of the first two stages is the first draft of the essay, for which students need organize the content and produce a brief outline in advance.

However

However is not the appropriate preposition here. You could use "Next" or "Following that" instead.

Then, student should be revised the draft with read resource material again

Students should revise the draft by reading the resource material again prior to adding suggestion and checking quotations to form the second draft.

should be stood strictly

should be carried out strictly

rewrite the final draft

rewriting the final draft

carefully check

careful checking

Student has to consider submitted the essay

Students have to submit the essay

I must say you have improved hell of a lot with this task. This is really cool :)

I agree with Pahan :)
OP SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
Mar 11, 2014   #6
Thank you, Tuan. You correct the grammar and syntax wholly.
I found in the dictionary, and i consider

conducing surveys

conducting is preferable.
please keep comment in my next. thank you


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