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Following political news have become an indisputable part of students daily activities


Faezeh_k1991 1 / -  
Sep 20, 2015   #1
TOEFL - Nowadays students are more interested in politics than past.

With passage of time politics is pervading all facets of social life to the extent that nowadays taking part in political trends, being proponent of a special political party or at least following political news have become all indisputable part of daily activities by throng of people. Taking a look at political events in the current centuries make this fact self-evident that most political revolutions have been initiated in universities and academic institute, cause a vast majority of political animals are always students. Although this is a fact which is embraced by all, whether the former students showed more enthusiasm toward political issues compared to current students is still a matter of debate about which a consensus has yet to be reached. I, as a student of the most political university in my country, state that this enthusiasm is augmenting day in day out (144).

To commence, the receptive spirit of students improved over time and now they are more willing to negotiate between students with different political views. Generally put, students in the past could not put up with bonding students of different political views even in non-political issues but as time goes by they become more open-minded towards others who are not proponents of their political party. To delve further into the issue, it was not a big issue for party adherents to grab the attention of politically middle-of-the-road students towards their view but convincing other party members toward the legitimacy of their beliefs needs a more receptive spirit, this fact leads to communicating other political parties in peace and harmony and holding debates to accentuate merits of their own party and demerits of others. Advent of this political debates in universities serves as a fertile ground to arm politicians gain their advocators among university students and also broadly exposes students to political issues into the extent that according to a census done recently in some politically active universities of Asian countries, declares unlike thirty years ago when a throng of students were politically neutral, today a vast majority of students belong themselves to a specific political party (206).

Moreover, social networking websites such as facebook and twitter make politics less serious, culminate in inspiring a great deal of students to political subjects. To put in general words, beforehand a student must have a great enthusiasm and dedication to be involved in political activities, besides efficient and fluent speech plays a substantial role in expressing your political point of view, on the contrary everybody with any level of political knowledge and speaking skill find himself convenient in political activities through social networking websites whether he be politically and socially adroit or not. To delineate, due to prevailing nature of social networking websites among university students, even though politicians themselves do not put effort on enticing students to their party using social networks, their proponents among students autonomously commit this role and disseminate their political school of thought online. Nevertheless, this fact cannot be generalized to all context, we can't turn blind eyes to the impact that social networking websites could have on spreading rumors about political figures end in distrust of students and their unwillingness to preserve being a politically active student (183).

Drawing a conclusion based on above upon mentioned facts, I reiterate that in this modern era students are more fascinated by the world of politics, owing to the way their social abilities promoted-especially receptiveness toward conflicting political views and also the prevailing nature of social networking sites and direct bearing of it on convenience of sharing political attitudes among students(60).
irfan727 49 / 68 29  
Sep 20, 2015   #2
ok.. lets try to give some suggestion for you

With passage of time politics is pervading all facets of social life to the extent that nowadays taking part in political trends, being proponent of a special political party or at least following political news have become all indisputable part of daily activities by throng of people

in this case, you need to focus on using article and plural
With the passage of time politics
being a proponent of a special political party
daily activities by throngs of people

initiated in universities and academic institute
it is suitable if u change it with institutions
initiated in universities and academic institutions

Advent of this political debates in universities serves ...
using article "the" sometimes important and attention with plural or singular
The Advent of this political debate in universities serves ...

social networking websites such asfacebook and twitter ...
using capital word also crucial.
social networking websites such as Facebook and Twitter ...


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