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What food do you eat at family celebration? Do you know how to prepare them? Do you need any special


gigigiiin 1 / -  
Sep 5, 2020   #1

Quang noddle



Every time my family have a celebration, I always eat Quang noddle. It's is very tasty and I started wonder about how to make Quang noddle. But after helping my mother make Quang noddle, I really confident that I can make Quang noddle by my self. Firstly, We need to cut the rips and vegetables into bite-sized pieces. Secondly, we stew the rips with some vegetables to make Quang noddle's soup. When the rips is ready, we will add spices to taste. On the other hand, we need to prepare noddle by making it from flour or buying it at the market. After that, we garnish it with a little stallions. Quang noddle is amazing but really easy to make and doesn't need any special equipment.
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Sep 5, 2020   #2
You should be using the third person indicative for the word have, which is has. You should also avoid using a contraction such as "it's" in academic writing. Always use the full spelling of a contraction. Pay attention to your punctuation usage. There are clauses where you should have used a comma (... very tasty, and I...). There are also word choice errors (my self = myself). You should not capitalize the second word in a sentence unless it is a proper noun (Firstly, We = firstly we). Take note of singular v. plural word usage ( when the rips is ready = are ready). Word choice errors also exist (stallions = scallions). Word spelling should also be of particular importance to you (noddle = noodle) Sentence formation errors got past you in editing (I really confident - I AM really confident)
Linda68 2 / 3  
Sep 5, 2020   #3
my self. - myself.
noddle - noodle


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