Nowadays, as the modern civilization takes place, a model of supplying directly from the farm to supermarkets in the cities has formed. To my view, despite the benefits it offers to people, it is still largely a negative development.
Good that you state your opinion however, your introduction need additional point to state the background of your topic such as
" Nowadays, as a result of modern civilization, food products are supplied to distant places in order to enhance business among global customers and to fulfill the expectation of consumers. There appears to be wide-range of advantages as well as disadvantages associated with this trend. In my personal view, it seems disadvantages are far outweigh the benefits. "
i'm a bit confused here. i thought it would be better answering the question if both sides are mentioned. when should we write about both sides and when should we only consider one side then?
As per my knowledge here you can discuss both advantage and disadvantage and state your prompt with supporting example to your position"
Dumi and Pahan correct me If I am wrong