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Forms of teaching - school should choose students according to their academic abilities

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Feb 9, 2021   #1

Forms of teaching

Nowadays effective education places a strong cornerstone for the well-being of any country. Due to this practice, educational practitioners give great attention to how to design an appropriate for all students. Regardless of this, while some people believe it is good to clarify students according to their level of learning, others maintain mixed class is more efficient.

On the one hand, dividing students into academic abilities groups bring a certain extent of benefits. One of the advantages is that each individual would have a schedule completely coordinating with their capacity. Because of the various studying level, students require specialized differences in teaching. For instance, high-achieved individual needs to approach advanced knowledge to maximize their knowledge and participate in major competitions. Another positive aspect of this is that underachievers would not be pressured on following other fellows.

However, I would contend designing a learning program embracing all types of learning abilities is more effective. Each person has strengths in particular areas, which means maybe an individual is weak in studying but a master in socializing, others could learn a lot in this discipline of knowledge. This idea orients to create a thorough development environment for all students, not only concentrating on accomplishments. Moreover, choosing people according to their academic abilities might lead to a bitter competitive environment, cause severe mental diseases in a wide range of students. In fact, accomplishments strain makes a number of high academic individuals choose death to escape, to free themselves. Last but not least, generating a clarified learning scheme would result in social discrimination, in which students with low scores are underrated and degraded.

In conclusion, each form of teaching has its own upwards. While dividing students is a great solution according to a group of people, I would lean towards building a mixed environment.

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Feb 10, 2021   #2
This is a compare and contrast essay with a personal opinion presentation. You have not followed the required discussion format for this presentation. There needs to be a threshed out discussion of each public opinion. An explanation as to why the public sectors believe that each opinion is the correct action to take with regards to classroom education. You do not need to agree or disagree with every public opinion, but, you must make sure that the reasons for the development of the opinion is clearly presented to the reader, before you create and present your own opinion. You did not effectively utilize the discussion format in this essay. It is barely explaining the public points of view and more heavily focused on your personal opinion. Remember, this is not a solely personal opinion essay. There are public opinions involved, therefore, you must use third person point of view reference points in the essay, as well as the personal reference point.

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