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Letter to a friend, asking for help - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 GENERAL TRAINING


Dipa19 8 / 13  
Sep 1, 2016   #1
You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend.

In your letter:
Give details of your study plans explain
why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job


Dear Arti,

Hallo how are you? Are you okay? Now, I live in Solo and I want to study plan in your country. Next year I program to continue further studies master's degree, the major is management business at Queensland University. I schedule in there for two years and I need a place to stay there.

I schedule there is not only learn but I want to take a part-time job, because in there I do not get a scholarship so I have to pay the study fees myself. In addition I still have to disburse a boarding house, the cost to eat everyday, and I want to find the experience to work abroad.

I would be grateful if you could help me to get a job in your country. Maybe you can find a job vacancy in accordance with my criteria or maybe you have acquaintances company that is in need of employees and may be important documents what should I take it.

I would really like to hear from you. Write back soon.

Best wishes,

Dipa.

Terminal23 6 / 10  
Sep 1, 2016   #2
hai dipaaa..

I schedule in thereAustralia for two years and I need ...

I schedule there is not only learnmy agenda not only learn but I want to take a part-time job, because in there I do not geti did not found a scholarship so I have ...

... is in need of employees and may bepossible important documents ...
ashelarisa48 36 / 52 4  
Sep 2, 2016   #3
Here is my feedback for you..

Hallo how are you? Are you okay? how is your life? ... I want to study plan in your country.

Next year I program decide to continue further studies my study master's degree, the major is management ...

I schedule in will be living there ...

I also have a plan schedule there is not only learn but I want to take a part-time job, because in there I do not get a scholarship so I have to pay the study fees provide the study funding by myself.

In addition I still have to disburse look for a boarding house, preparing the the cost to eat everyday living cost.

Hope this helps.
Faridadwi18 67 / 104 13  
Sep 2, 2016   #4
Hi Dipa,

- Now, I live in Solo and I want to studyhave a plan to study in your country. Next year,I will continue my study program to continue further studiesin master's degree, the major ...

I have a schedule in there for ...
- I have schedule there is not only learn but also I want to (...), because in there I do not get a scholarship so I have to pay the study feestuition by myself

- ... company that is in need ofan employees and may be what kind of important documents whatwhich I should I take it .

Hopefully it helps.


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