@sfiza you have a confusing method of presenting information in this letter. For example, the following statement:
Actually he has informed about your visit.
indicates that your neighbor told you about the coming visit of his friend. What you want to say is that you informed your neighbor about your friend's visit so the first person pronoun I should be in use here as in "I informed him about your visit".
As I have informed you regarding my one month vacation when you will stay at my place.
- There is no sense or meaning to this sentence. You informed your friend that the said friend will stay in your place and? There is no subject nor verb to this sentence. It doesn't tell the reader anything. But it does confuse the reader very well.
What exactly is a water geezer? You meant to say faucet right? A faucet is what the sinks at home use for water delivery. A geezer is a queer, odd, or eccentric person. What you are describing is a thing that does not qualify as any of these based on the definition of the word.
You failed to provide instructions to your friend as to how to visit these places of interest that you mentioned. That was required in the prompt as part of the places of interest to visit. Your friend is a tourist and therefore, does not have any idea as to how to get around your place of residence.
Overall, this is terrible work and will not pass the essay writing criteria on any basis.