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Gap in progression Common App prompt (250 words)



trippletrouble12 1 / 1  
Jan 13, 2025   #1
Hi. I am new here. Could someone please tell me if the format for this works? Is the information included relevant, and is mentioning that I got rejected from Uni in Pakistan a bad look, because it is truly the reason why I had to take a gap year.

In August 2024, I found myself facing a gap year after not being admitted to my top-choice university in Pakistan. Being only 17, I recognized the opportunities that this time period could bring and saw it as a chance to grow beyond academics.

With my studies on hold, I returned to Murree, my hometown where I assisted my parents at their hospital, getting a chance to become part of their professional life. As I actively engaged with my community, patients and professionals alike, the socio-economic challenges faced by the public were hard to ignore. Many struggled to afford healthcare, education, and basic facilities. These observations gave me a firsthand understanding of how Economics, my desired major, can address systemic inequalities affecting large populations.

Living in the peripheries, with fewer distractions, I found the space to reflect on the world around me. My daily routine involved watching movies, following the news, listening to music, and crocheting, but more importantly, I began to engage with these hobbies in a more meaningful way. To channel my evolving perspectives, I became part of the Diverse Voice Movement as a research and content writing volunteer. Writing about art, culture, history, and current affairs refined my ability to voice my opinions and the volunteer experience connected me with a cohort that allowed me to grow intellectually.
This chapter before university has given me a deeper understanding of how I can utilize my education to make a meaningful impact. I now find myself particularly inclined towards the policy side of economics, and I see this clarity as essential before moving forward with my academic journey.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15539  
Jan 13, 2025   #2
Since you mentioned that you took a gap year because you were not accepted into your first choice university, you should provide information that explains why you did not opt to attend your second choice university. What drove you to take a gap year when you could have attended a different university during the interim? Most of the reviewers will see your acceptance into the 2nd university as a foundation for your future move to your first university choice. It is important that you explain that aspect before you move on to the narration of how you spent your gap year. It will allow the reviewer to better understand what drove your choice to take a gap year instead.
OP trippletrouble12 1 / 1  
Jan 13, 2025   #3
@Holt
Thank you for your feedback! Besides that, is the content fine?


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