I partially agree with the statement that some people are born with talents for music or sports since i believe that it is true that children can be trained to become a good sportsperson or a musician too.
All of these claims come down to one thing ultimately and that is passion. It can be seen throughout history that certain people show passion at a very early age than others which has led them to be a successful sportsperson or a musician and earn the title "talent by birth". If "talent by birth" is to be believed then such an individual should always win and would also require no/ minimum requirement for training.
Hi.... You need to pay attention to your essay structure - Your essay needs to contain an introduction, body paragraphs and a conclusion. This is the format for your introduction;Hook
- Write a sentence that can grab reader's attention and also has a direct relevance to your prompt.Background of the Issue
- Discuss the issue by introducing the two sides of the argument.State your opinion
- Conclude your introduction with stating your opinion.