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Global trade of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009


Bams17 28 / 43  
Nov 23, 2016   #1
Global trade of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009

The information about global trade of hybrid vehicles between 2006 and 2009 is presented by bar chart. Overall it can be seen that the US always be the biggest trade during the periode except in the last period.

In 2007, rate of trade in the US was the biggest point at 350,000 ;however in the next year it was slight increase by 30,000 in 2008 from 350,000. Interestingly, in the last period vehicles sell in the Us was quite similar as rate in the first period, those were 250,000 in 2006 and 280,000 in 2009.

On the other word, both of japan and other had similar rate in the first year at 50,000 in 2006. In the next 2 years, they had similar pattern that was increase slightly. Strikingly, in the last period japan extremely increase and it reach bigger than the US at 340,000 in the same peiode in 2009. This was the best achievement in japan, while the other still stable between 2008 and 2009.

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harveysui2 4 / 6 3  
Nov 23, 2016   #2
periode - period
it was slight increase - it has slightly increased to
that was increase slightly - that increased slightly
japan extremely increase - japan extremely increased it reached
yurikeyuri 43 / 61 2  
Nov 23, 2016   #3
Hello, let me give my correction for you

The information about the global trade of hybrid vehicles

is presented by the bar chart

during the periodeperiod except in the last period

quite similar asto the rate in the first period(the correct preposition is to after the word "similar")

they had the similar pattern that was increaseincreased slightly

it reachreachs bigger

thank you
justivy03 - / 2,367 607  
Nov 24, 2016   #4
Hi Bams, below are my thoughts for this analysis.

- byin the bar chart.
- Overall it can be seen that the US has always
- been the biggest trader
- during the periode except infor the last period.

- In 2007,the rate of trade in the US
- washas the biggest point at 350,000
- it washas a slight increase by 30,000
- in the last period, vehicles sellsales in the
- UsUS was quite similar as the rate in the first period,

- On the other word, both ofFor japan and
- other countries had similar rate in the first year
- that was increased slightly.
- peiode inof 2009.

There you have it Bams, I hope the above remarks are helpful to your revision.


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