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IELTS: Global warming is warming up of the earth to produce greenhouse gases


upinipin 32 / 49 1  
May 3, 2014   #1
Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today.
What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
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Global warming is warming up of the earth to produce greenhouse gases. Greenhouse gases is affected from CO2 producing from burned fossil fuel. Because of felling trees that absorb CO2. So, that heat energy trapped on the land. And then, the heat energy reflected off atmosphere and partly radiated into space. Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. Today's, people alarmed about global warming.

Government can reduce the global warming problem with the way to fasten the regulation about logging forest. And then, global warming can reduce with use renewable fuel which is more cycle than fossil fuel. Refuse left over is one of global warming factor. so that, we must reduce rubbish production in each person. The government announce recycling waste.

Nowadays, every body knew about global warning issue. They learn about this issue from advertising and information from government.

BOMAT_IRA 29 / 40  
May 3, 2014   #2
The government announce recycling waste.

>> The government announces...

Nowadays, every body knew about global warning issue.

Write more, upinipin.. :)
fikri 5 / 317 71  
May 4, 2014   #3
hello,,which ielts writing task is it? you just wrote 149 words,
in ielts writing task1 you should write 150 words
here, this task is writing task 2, so you should write at least 250 words
dumi 1 / 6,929 1592  
May 6, 2014   #4
Well, you need to have at least 4 paras in your essay for this task if you aim at a decent score. You also need to meet the minimum word count requirement. These four paras need to contain an introduction, 2 body paras (minimum) and a conclusion. What you've written above does not meet these requirements :(

Is it just a part of your essay or the full essay?


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