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A glory day to Hillary Clinton in first presidential debate


PHA2016 39 / 62 4  
Sep 28, 2016   #1
Hillary started impressing performance which is defeated the rival, Donald Trump of the first presidential debate at Hofstra University, America. This campaign as like asymmetric war that explained unequal battle. The candidates have not same idea such economy sector, Trump blamed Hillary which she do nothing to fix this problem along 30 years as public representative. On the other hand, Hillary striking back which Mr Trumph talked non-sense. She was good preparation and notoriously. By the end of debate, the candidates spent more time talked about tax and war. Trump had been denying for not paying income tax to federal whereas Hillary opposite, said 'on behalf of myself, and I think on behalf of a majority of the American people, say that, you know, our word is good. Thus, this debate resulted that one candidate who was good preparation and other confused, 1-0 to Mrs Clinton.

Source: economist.com/blogs/democracyinamerica/2016/09/win-hillary-clinton

RAY93 35 / 186 136  
Sep 28, 2016   #2
Hillary started impressing performance which...

Hillary started delivering impressive performance by defeating her rival, Donal Trump, in the first presidential debate at Hofstra University, America

This campaign as likeS asymmetric war ...
The candidates have not same DIFFERENT idea such AS IN economy sector WHILE Trump blamed Hillary which she do FOR DOING nothing to fix this problem along 30 years as A public representative.

On the other hand, Hillary WAS striking back which Mr Trumph BY SAYING HE talked non-sense. She was good preparation WELL PREPARRED and notoriously. By the end of debate, the THOSE candidates spent more ...

Trump had been denying for not paying income tax to federal whereas Hillary IN THE opposite said 'on behalf of myself, and I think on behalf of a majority of the American people, say that, you know, our word is good.UNCLEAR QUOTE

Thus, this debate resulted that ON one candidate who was good preparED and other confused, 1-0 to Mrs Clinton.


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