'Thank you God for those gifts' - friendship essay

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friendship

Friends are good and gift from god to our life to be happy and support us under all conditions. Its relationship fall of faithful, sincere and honest .

friendship is so important for us, It makes us sociable and get rid of shyness. Friends encourage us in bad and good condition, they feel gladness with your achievements and push u to achieve your dreams. Friend like tree the seed in the soil even though bad conditions and storms that are exposed they grow so hard and became a strong tree so the friends with the bad state of affairs the relation grow, become strong and close with each other.

The friends respect your opinion and know how do u think and feel even if your friend incompatibility with you and you have different opinion he can understand you with his own way and he can bears your temper, He can relax you . we need friends especially when we have a problem the can encourage us, find the solution and how to overcome the problems.

I have a lot of friends some of them are close friend and others are less they occupied a large part in my life. I have friend her name Anna, she is so smart, affictionate and sweetheart, we do a lot of activity like as go to the picnic, tennis and racing, we spend interesting time with each other. she can speak turkish so she learns me, we alternative all secret with each other she is only I confident with her. we lighter about our worries. she is always with me in each step in my life.

Thankful god for those gifts in our life, friends like a breath.

thank u so much for u note its so benefit for me do u think this essay is good for toefl preparation

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I have a lot of friends. Some of them are close friends and others are less they occupied a large part in my life. I have friend her name Anna,. She is so smart and affictionate and sweetheartsweet . We do a lot of activity like as go to the picnic, play tennis and racing together.We spend interesting time with each other. sS he can speak turkish so she learnsteaches me. We alternativeexchangeall secretsecrets with each other. She is only I confident with hermy only confidante . we lighter about our worriesWe lighten each others' mood . She is always with me in each step in my life.

Thankful god for those gifts in our life - friends are important to our lives like a breathevery single breath we take .

I've made many grammatical revisions to your essay, and added a few stylistic revisions as well. Good luck for your TOEFL exam, hope this helps!

Thanks a lot for ur note its so help me in my essay. could i ask u about why u use faith sincerity and honesty????

They are the noun form of the adjectives you used originally. In this context, noun is the correct form, not adjectives...I don't know which grammar rule to cite though, so I can't really help you identify the name of the error you made.

thanks so much

Friends are a precious gift from god who would stay with us in both thick and thin.


Friendship is based on trust, sincerity, honesty and faithfullness.
This essay lacks proper organization of ideas. Take one aspect of friendship per para and discuss about it.

Thank God for the gifts in our life. Friends are the breath of life.

Maybe something like that? Make sure you capitalize properly.

Your phrasing really needs work. You would really benefit from an English grammar primer.