Naeem, when you start a thread, please use words that tell what the essay is about.
We cannot deny to the fact that it has its has both advantages and disadvantages to the students going abroad for their further higher studies.i dont think this part is really necessary
Aisha, I really like the way you simplified this sentence. In order to help with the practice of English, I'll show an alternative, too. Here is another way to make that sentence work, Naeem. See below:
We cannot deny
to the fact that
it studying abroad has both advantages and disadvantages.
Another mistake I found is this:
On the other hand some students
my find it difficult living away from their homes ...
You should use the word "might."
I might go to the show.
I
my go to the show.
I might accidentally use the word "my" instead of "might" because they sound the same.
I
my use the wrong word.
I might use the wrong word.
...and families in a
totally different culture and among different people.
:-)