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'good to be realized for government' - The tax of private car owners


upinipin 32 / 49 1  
May 1, 2014   #1
In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
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Many kinds of traffic problems are complicated to find the solution. All types of solution have given to government. But, it is always failed to be done because pro and contrast by public. Tax private car owner is one of the solutions for government to reduce traffic problems. This is a public solution in the future and takes advantages for public.

The advantage of tax private car owners giving increased income for government. This income can be used to improve public transportation. And then, the income can be used as aid social contributed. In the other hand, the advantage of tax private car owners can reduce the ownership of car. People would be considered to buy a car if they must be taxed and their public transportation is more comfortable than private car.

The disadvantage of tax private car owners makes people fear to buy a car. In one family should be good if they have a private car for family needed. But, it not must be left over, such as one person one private car like today's existed. This taxed would make difficult people who low income but they have private car.

Tax private car owners would be good to be realized for government. Only if, the government is fair in maintenance the regulation.

BOMAT_IRA 29 / 40  
May 1, 2014   #2
The disadvantage of tax private car owners makes people fear to buy a car.
brandymhunter 2 / 15 2  
May 1, 2014   #3
As a reader, I am having trouble seeing what the clear advantages and disadvantages are. Let's take a closer look at the questions you are asked to answer in this essay:

What is the advantage of taxing (take money from) car owners in order to fund public transportation like buses and trains?

The advantage of taxtaxing private car owners givingis that itincreasedincreases income for government. This income can be used to improve public transportation. And then, the income can be used as aid social contributed. In the other hand, the advantage of tax private car owners can reduce the ownership of car. People would be considered to buy a car if they must be taxed and their public transportation is more comfortable than private car.

What is the disadvantage of taxing (take money from) car owners in order to give the money to public transportation like buses and trains?

The disadvantage of taxing private car owners is that it makes people fearafraid to buy a car. In one family should be good if they have a private car for family needed. But, it not must be left over, such as one person one private car like today's existed. This taxed would make difficult people who low income but they have private car.

You made good points in your list of disadvantages. What do you think would happen if everyone was afraid to (or could not afford to) buy a car?
fikri 5 / 317 71  
May 1, 2014   #4
Tax private car owner is one of the solutions for government to reduce traffic problems.

you put one followed by noun plural, it is contradict

to connect the second paragraph to the third, you can put 'however' or 'on the other hand' because these paragraphs have contrast explanation
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
May 2, 2014   #5
Many kinds of traffic problems are complicated to find the solution.

Don't open your essay with complicated sentences :( Here you leave the reader with so many questions - what are the many kinds of traffic problems you talk about?


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