Please check my toefl essay.
Hi Wipu --
As you can see from the first paragraph alone -- while your essay is a good one -- it's going to need some work. I am not sure where you are with respect to your learning the TOEFL, and I am assuming that you are just now starting out -- which means that we have the time to work together, no?
Tell me -- are you familiar with Stephen King? He wrote a good book, which is called
On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft. I suggest that you might want to consider getting a copy of this book. It is a very interesting book, and I think that it might be able to show you a few pointers when it comes to your writing. Let me know if there is any way that I can help you!
--Mark :)
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