Hi Veru,
One cannot deny that painters have the right freedom for paint in any way that they wanted>
There is no denying that innovative artists have the rights to express their ideas and thoughts in the ways they prefer.
This statement could be true.
Your clear position should avoid modal verb, otherwise your position may be subjective to the reader
I have my own attempt posted to the forum a while ago. I think my ideas are more persuasive.
I support that creative artists should entitled the freedom to express their ideas and thoughts in the ways they prefer.
Admittedly, freeing those unconventional art works brings some negative to the society. 1. violent and erotic paintings destructs minors' mental development in their early age. 2. creative films make the general public misunderstanding the truth. this is because those film producers wish to achieve their expected fame and reputation.
However, give innovative artists freedom has several merits. 1. supporting them will retain a nation's identity and culture heritage. very beneficial for international exchange. 2. satisfy the citizens spiritual enjoyable. for example, a stylish sculpture can be used as the decoration, to create a comfortable and relaxing office and home environment.
Cheers