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Governments should ban smoking in all public places and also build some places for smokers there


nomad22001 1 / -  
Jan 23, 2013   #1
All mankind have created free but they are social creations. They are free to do everything when they are alone, but not in a public place. They can not do everything they want. They have to respect for the laws and others' privacy. People have the right to inhale fresh and clean air especially in public places. Some people like to smoke cigarette. In some countries, smoking has banned by governments in all public places. I shall argue that why this should be banned.

Firstly, people struggle hard for their live and health. Health issue is a major topic for all people especially for those who have breath disease. Cigarette smoke is one of those matters which are harmful for both smokers and second-handed smokers.

Secondly, adolescences have more affected by society than by parents or families. When we let people do some bad habits, such as smoking, in a public place, they see them and will think that "why we should not try it?" They have curious temperament. They will tell themselves "its use will not be harmful for one time." But unfortunately, cigarette has Nicotine and it cause to feel more relax, so it will persuade them to smoke more and more cigarettes.

In addition, when person live in a society, they have some social rights, for example they have the right to use from public places such as buses, subways, restaurants, etc. We should not restrict them by our behaviors for example by smoking in such public places. Unfortunately, the numbers of smokers are increasing widely. These people have addicted to it, so they will need to smoke cigarette even they will be in a public place. If we want to solve this problem, we should build some places for smokers so they can go there and smoke cigarette without annoying others.

In conclusion, I believe and would maintain that not only should governments advert about harmfulness of inhaling cigarette smoke and banned smoking in all public places, but also they should build some places for smokers in these area.
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Jan 23, 2013   #2
Hi,
Have a small request for you; Please post your writing task essays in the "writing feedback" forum. That would help you earn more comments too :)

All mankind have created free but they are social creations.

.... This sentence fails to give a clear idea as to what you mean. Is it;
Every man is entitled to a free life, yet he should live in within the social norms.

They are free to do everything when they are alone, but not in a public place.

...now the idea is getting clearer :D
samnemeth 2 / 11 3  
Jan 23, 2013   #3
Firstly, people struggle hard for their live and health..

I think this is a very good point but expand on it a little bit. Why is it so bad for people to inhale cigarette smoke? For both smokes and non smokers.


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