At the moment in Australia occurs shifted the continents. That is most phenomena in the world including America and others countries. To illustrates, Australia has shifted plate in a year about 2.7 inchis, not only them but also America get the shifting continents, report from new york times.
According to the director of the carthography national geographic, damien saunder, America has faster moving otentonic plate than others land approximately three to four inchis a year. This ensue influence to accuracy of coordinate GPS and cellphones don't have that level of accuracy also. In the other side they said when there is significant shifting land plate, we need to revise coordinate of GPS.
It is aim to get accuration coordinate with high technology. Although it will spending to more time, the technology will create maps including by farmers who spray fields with precision agriculture and self-driving vehicles.
Hello Bams14,
To illustrates, for illustration, Australia has shifted (...), report from new york times.New York Times
... the carthography national geographic, damien saunderDamien Saunder , America has faster (...) three to four inchisinches a year.
Thisthese ensue influence to (...) and cellphones don'tdo not have that level of
accuracy also
hope these help
Hi Bams, right pf the bat, I notice that you are writing the name of the subject in small letters and this should be immediately corrected, I understand that this is just a draft, however, draft or not, you have to maintain and follow the rules of the English language. Names are written in capital letters ( the first letter of the first and last name ), this is not only making sure that you follow the rules but also to show respect to the bearer of the name, I know that you would expect the same treatment for your name, right.
Moreover, below are additional enhancement for your essay.
- At the moment inThe geographic location of Australia
- occurs to have shifted the continents .
- That is mostThis phenomena is witnessed in the world
- To illustrates , Australia has shifted plate in a yearfor about 2.7 inchis,
- not only them but also America get the shifting continents,also shifted base on the report from new york times.
- D amien S aunder, America has
- This ensue influence to the accuracy of
- coordinates and GPS andon cellphones
- don'tthat might not have that level of accuracy also.
- In the other side theyOn the other hand, it is said when
- It is aim to get accurationWe aim to provide accurate coordinates with
- will mean spending to more time,
There you have it Bams, I hope the remarks are helpful and for future writing reference, mind the form of the words that you associate in your sentences and your sentences should be created in accordance to the ideas you are trying to convey to your readers and not a direct translation of what and how you understand the article.
hallo i will try to give some correction..
i hope that my correction will help your writing.
Although it will spending(spend) to more time
That(it) is most phenomena in the world
they said when there is(was)significant shifting land plate
I do apologize if i have mistakes in my correction because I am still studying.
thank you.
At the moment in Australia occurs shifted the continents.
confusing sentence. =
at this moment, Australia continent has shifted
That is most phenomena in the world including America and others countries.
it is a common phenomenon which is also happening in America and others continentTo illustrates, Australia has shifted plate in a year about ...
to illustrate, Australian plate has shifted about 2.7 inch in a year just as America, according to a report form TimesAccording to the director of the
carthography[spelling ]
national geographic, damien saunder,[capitalization issue] America has faster moving
of otentonic plate than others land
by approximately three to four
inchis[spelling] a year. This
ensue influence[double verb] to accuracy of coordinate GPS
andwhile cellphones don't ...
It is
the aim to get
accurationaccurate coordinate with high technology.
at all, you need to concern on some basic grammatical rules in writing, also the sense or function of your sentence