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About the Grad CF Course (difficulty, diversity)


Nesreen 15 / 41  
Jan 24, 2011   #1
please check my essay and tell me your opinion??

The Grade CF course is one of the hardest levels at Exceed institute that is compulsory for students to pass in order to graduate. This course has a lot of vocabulary and very difficult novels. When I started this term, I was so anxious because many people have scared me of the complicity and intensity of that module which called Scientific Module. At the end of the course, however; I found out that this course was one of the easiest modules I have ever studied at Exceed because of two main reasons.

The first reason was the competent teacher we had that facilitated the difficulty of the course. In each unit, the teacher helped us to memories the vocabulary by making many competitions between the students. Also, during the course, the teacher allowed the other class, conversation class, to mingle with us, and we had very interesting topics to discuss. Moreover, the teacher had a funny way of controlling the class by using the whistle that helped him to give an equal opportunity to each student to talk and express her/his opinion.

Besides the first reason, the diversity of the topics in the curricula of Grad CF course was the other main reason that made us eager to know more. This course has three units which are related to the medical field. The topics were too fascinating for us to talk about like how life begins and what genetically engineered means. Also, the stories were wonderful that are not only have a lot of beneficial vocabulary but also they were amazing stories with their weird plots.

To wind it up, the Grad CF course was one of the impressive courses I have ever taken at Exceed because of the qualified teacher we had and the different topics of the curricula. I recommended students to go ahead and study grade CF at Exceed and never pay any attention to others opinions because people judge things according to their different experiences.

OP Nesreen 15 / 41  
Jan 24, 2011   #2
Can you please Check my essay guys??
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Jan 27, 2011   #3
Sorry I'm so slow! Still catching up from the busy season...

Exceed institute

Shouldn't Institute be capitalized here?

When I started this term, I was so anxious because, many people have scared me of the complicity and by talking about the intensity of that module called "Scientific Module."

At the end of the course, however; I found out that this course was one of the easiest modules I have had ever studied at Exceed because of two main reasons.

...and never pay any attention to others' opinions, because people judge things according to their different experiences.

Well done!

I think you should also make this change:
Besides the first reason, The second reason involves the diversity of the topics ...

:-)


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