What is the prompt? This is sweet and all, but I know nothing about you. I don't think you even mentioned yourself once other than how much you love your grandmother.
If this is an influential person essay, you need to say how she influenced you.
She usually has taught her grandchildren how to be a good person and have a good manner
She has taught her grandchildren good manners and things it takes to be a good person (You can mention yourself here)
made my grandma fell in love again
grandma fall in love again
So, she has lived with her daughters - my aunt
she has lived with her daughters, my aunts
I really admire my grandma about what she had made for family and I
I truly admire my grandma for all that she has made for my family
And I also love her. whenever you meet her
I love her. Whenever you meet her...