The graph
Incomplete image identifier. What type of graph? Review and memorize the differences.
Your first trending sentence should have beepresented in 2 sentences:
- Upward thend
- Other material reference
Afterwards
Use a more specific year reference point for better graph point referencing.
4 years after,
You can indicate the year in a parenthesis for GRA scoring improvement.
As we can see in the charf
You did not provide the image. You cannot use this reference. Since you did not establish a proper mental description in the summary overview, the reader cannot create an accurate mental description in reference to this phrase.
* Limited review provided due to lack of image for comparison purposes.