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(IELTS graph)Japanese tourists &Australia's share of Japanese tourist market


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Feb 24, 2013   #1
The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
- You should write at least 150 words.
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The given graphs provide information of Japanese tourists travelling abroad from 1985 to 1995 and Australia's share of Japan's tourism from 1985 to 1994.

At a glance, the Japanese tourists travelling abroad showed a gradual raise during one decade from 1985, with a negligible falls. It reached the peak rate during 1995, nearly 15.5 million. The share of Australia in the Japans share market also followed the same trend. The numbers of Japanese traveled abroad were, only 4.5 million in the year 1985, which showed a gradual steady raise in the following five years until 1990. It declined by 25 million in 1991 and remained roughly constant in the next two years around 12 million. Thereafter it increased remarkably in 1994 and 1995 and reached at its maximum of 15.5 million tourists in the year 1995.

Turning to the second graph, which represents the Australia's share on Japans tourism, from 1985 to1994, showed a sharp increase in its percentage. In 1985, it was only 2%shoot up the next three years and reached around 5% in the year 1988. The next year though it dropped by 1% it regained its popularity, continued the significant growth in the following five years and reached at the maximum level in 1993. Thereafter it declined negligibly at the end of the given period 1994.

In short, Australia's share on Japan's tourism continuously raised and showed an increase of three times after a period of nine years, whereas, Japan's tourists travelled abroad shoot up remarkably by an increase of 11.5 million people after a decade.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
- You should write at least 150 words.
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.






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