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IELTS Graph: Most popular travel destinations for UK people


ammus1 10 / 29  
May 8, 2014   #1
Hai friends,please correct my graph and thanks in advance.

Ques:The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK,and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

Ans:The line graph provides information about the people who visits to and from the UK over a period of 20 years and the bar chart illustrates the most popular destinations visited by the UK residents in the year 1999.

Overall,both UK and overseas residents travel to and from UK was increased significantly during the given period.However ,the number of people who visited abroad was far higher than the visits of overseas residents to the UK.Moreover,the most popular destination among the UK residents is France which is accounted for approximately11 million people.

In 1979, only 10 million overseas people visited the UK,then it gradually increase to approximately12 million people in the middle of 1984 and 1989.Since then,it increased dramatically and reached almost 25 million people in 1999.Similarly ,12 million UK residents visited abroad in 1979 and it attained 20 million in1986.From then onwards,it increased sharply and reached at its peak level with around 55million in 1999.

As from the bar chart,France was the most popular destination among the UK people followed by Spain,USA and Greece.The least popular country among them was Turkey which accounted for almost 3 million people.
SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
May 8, 2014   #2
Heloo friend, Please adding the graph picture. I see another forum member already help you in your previous post.
OP ammus1 10 / 29  
May 9, 2014   #3
Hanafi, I tried but I couldn't
Please tell me how to upload it.
fikri 5 / 317 71  
May 9, 2014   #4
Overall,both UK and overseas residents travel to and from UK was increased significantly during the given period

does it a passive sentence?
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
May 9, 2014   #5
Hanafi, I tried but I couldn't
Please tell me how to upload it.

In your Message block (the area where you type your essay) you find a feature "Attach file(s)". Click on that and then it will pop up you to choose the file and upload. Hope you got it.

Without seeing the graph it is difficult to provide you with meaningful feedbacks.


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