The graph below shows information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries

Illustrated in the line chart is not only the proportion of population living in cities in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020 but also predictions over the period of 10 years. Overall, it is clear that Malaysia and Indonesia citizens who living in cyber areas witnessed a stable increase over the past and future, while Thailand and Philippines experience slightly fluctuations.
To begin with Indonesia and Malaysia had the same trend from 1970 to 2000, when the percentage of population living in cities both saw steady increase from more than 10% in 1970 to 30% in 2000 for Indonesian and that Malaysian also rose from 30% to 45% but only between 1970 and 1990. Since 1990 and 2000, both countries went up to 50% and 75% respectively. During the period of 10 years in the future, this percentage still be predicted that see an upward trend to almost 60% and 85% for Indonesia and Malaysia.
In contrast, the proportion of residents in Thailand and Philippines showed a downward trend over the period of 50 years in the past. From the beginning, both countries also had an unusual trend, from 1970 to 1900, Thailand and Philippines witnessed an unstable rising with nearby 30% for the former and 50% for the later. After a slightly decrease in 1980 before reaching 50% in 1990, Philippines continues witnessed an decline in 2010 to over than 40%, while Thailand still remained unchanged and that reached to 30%. Finally, from 2020 to 2040, these countries experience an upward trend to 45% and 50% respectively.

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