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The graphs below show the different reasons of two group of students to choose Dorriford University



huyentran123456 1 / -  
Jun 10, 2025   #1
The pie charts illustrate the multiple reasons of two group of teenagers to choose Dorriford University.

Overall, the reason for studying nearby homes accounted for the largest over the surveyed period. The least significant factor for the 18-24 age group was the reputation of teaching staff, while students who chose facilities on campus comprised the smallest proportion in age 25 and over.

As for expectation, closing to home made up 35% which maintained its lead during the 18-24 age group. This is followed by the course offered which is lower than close to home only 1%. Moreover, the figure for the facilities on campus was 14% which is higher than the opportunity to study abroad as a part of course 5%. Lastly, an insignificant share of 4% is related to industry, which is twice as much as the reputation of teaching staff.

Moving further, the ratio of students who chose closing to home demonstrated 39% in age 25 and over, which is the highest percentage rather than the others. A lot of scholars selected Dorriford University due to the course offered at 24%. Meanwhile, the number of students who chose the related to industry exhibited 20%, which is higher than the reputation of teaching staff by 8%. Finally, the proportion of scholars is closely the same 3% and 2% who prefer Dorriford University because of the opportunity to study abroad as a part of course and facilities on campus.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15676  
Jun 10, 2025   #2
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