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"green movement" - What is Ecotourism ? (Interesting tourism)


Aris05 31 / 24 1  
Aug 25, 2016   #1
The ecotourism concept arise out "green movement" that have meaning to preserve the natural environment. The goals not only avoid harming the environment but also give beneficial for local ecology and society. Ecotourism offers many types of destination like natural destination. It can spend a few weeks in remote area with local resident. Ecotourism look for enviromentally friendly accommodations such us renewable resources and recycling. It also seek out hotels and tourist companies that hire mainly local staff. Ecotourism usually don't use cruise ships because they produce not only a harmfull emmisions but also many tons of garbage and wastewater. The growing of ecotourism interest causes many companies advertise themselves as ecotourism companies although not all the companies practice the principle.The travelers must choose carefully and ensure that the company practice the ecotourism principle. The positive side is that become the indication of ecotourism development.

akbarmappiare 31 / 469 275  
Aug 26, 2016   #2
Hi Aris.
These are my corrections to improve your writing.
Please, make you sure to meet my notes in this summary.


The ecotourism concept arisS out "green movement" that have meaning AIM to preserve the natural environment. The goals DO not only avoid harming ...

THE Ecotourism offers many types of A destination like THE natural destination. It can spend a few weeks in A remote area with A local resident. THE Ecotourism lookS for enviroNmentally friendly accommodations ...

It also seekS out hotels and tourist companies TOURISMS that hire mainly local staff. THE Ecotourism usually don't DOES NOT (Please, pay attention to contraction in the formal writing. never ever ever do it) use cruise ships because they produce not only a harmfull emmisions EMISSIONS but also many tons ...

The growing AN INCREASE of ecotourism interest (...) themselves as THE ecotourism companies although ...
The travelers must choose (...) the company practiceS the ecotourism principle. The positive side is that TO become the indication ...

Note:
Please call your attention to:
1. Verb Agreement
2. Use of the article.
3. never use the contraction in the formal writing.
4. misspelled words
5. the meaning of the sentences

I really believe you will show the better progress on condition that you wanna provide much time to practice again and again.
keep spirit.
Good luck
hirani03 36 / 50 5  
Aug 26, 2016   #3
Hi Aris05.
I hope these corrections help you :)

... environment but also give beneficialbenefit for local ecology and society.

Ecotourism offers many types of destinationdestinations(countable) like natural destination.

... friendly accommodations such usas renewable resources and recycling.

It also seekseeks out hotels and tourist companies that hire mainlymain local staff.

... they produce not only a harmfullharmfulemmisionsemissions but also many tons ...
alfadmishal20 2 / 1  
Aug 28, 2016   #4
there are some similar words that you can use on your next essay, good luck aris.

... "green movement" that have meaning to preserve the natural environment(nature) .

The goals not only avoid harming theenvironment Nature but also give ...

... friendly accommodations such us as renewable resources ...

... they produce not only a harmfull emm isions but also many tons...

... although not all the companies practice the principle/value .

... practice the ecotourism principle/code .

... indication of ecotourism development/improvement .
Qaranewlagi52 4 / 8  
Sep 19, 2016   #5
Hay haris, here my corrections hopefully can help you for improve your writing

- but also give beneficial(benefit) for local ecology and society
- Ecotourism offers many types of destination(Destinations) like natural destination
- It also seek(seeks) out hotels and tourist companies that hire mainly(main) local staff
- they produce not only a harmfull (harmful) emmisions(emissions) but also many tons of garbage and wastewater

note : more be carefful about your spelling, happy writing!
zian41 1 / 4  
Sep 19, 2016   #6
Hello there, let me give some correction for you ...
... out "green movement" that have (has) meaning to preserve ...
... environment but also give beneficial ( benefit) for local ecology and society.
Ecotourism look for enviromentally ( wrong spelling) friendly accommodations such us ...
... that hire mainly local staff.only a harmfull emmisions (harmful emission)

Ecotourism look for (NOUN) enviromentally friendly ( adj+adj, it is fobiden) accommodations such us (as)


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