According to ourthe
constitution, every citizen has the right to protect himself whether with guns, knives or any other tools
--> weapons (try that if you like it)
However, when we hear the word gun, we recall many crimes have been committed by people with that tool.
Take that phrase out, it seem like you are trying to tolerate gun. I don't know how to explain why, but usually when people try to support something, they would put the stereotype or how other people would think then they display their opinion.
In my country (What country? ), the usage of guns spread all over the country inas an excuse of that they areit is one of our customs.
Although the idea of banning guns is too difficult to be accepted in myby the society, I think the government should ban guns among the entire citizens all over the country for guns aid in the society's damagefor the safety of the country .
Guns and firearmsoften lead to the destruction of a society .
They basically means the same thing so pick one
There are many accidents have been committed happened inside homes by one of the family members by mistakethat involve guns
For instanceexample , Mohammed killed his sister when he was 20 years by mistake when he was trying to frighten her by his gun. He shot her in the head while she was cooking in the kitchen shot his sister accidentally while she was in the kitchen when he tried to scare her with a gun.
Furthermore, Because of the easiest way of obtaining guns in my country especially at homes
doesnt make sense, you did not support that), there are several many crimes relating to suicide have been perpetrated.
--> There are several suicide incidents.
For example, according to theaeye witness, the a driver killed the passenger because he did not give him 20 YR his customer because the person did not pay him 20YR
I think that's what you mean, i'm not sure )
which considers to be one of Yemen's problems.
that destroy the society, (no comma ) and I strongly believe
SoI n my opinion, the government should think seriously of put strict laws that prohibitthe use of guns to public and put very severe punishments to which they break those lawspunish severely those who break that law .
Sorry I should have just copy and paste the essay and edit straight from that instead of quoting each sentence. Now it's all messy and hard to understand. Hope you can understand all that and hope it helped a little. Good luck