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Happiness is a state of mind; Realizing Happiness


asokapalama 3 / 18  
Sep 15, 2010   #1
Dear Frinds,

I would like to have your views about the following short essay. You all can contribute.

Thanks

Asoka

Realizing Happiness

People from all walks of life try to achieve happiness through different methods. Happiness is a state of mind that seems to come and go, vanishing over a period of time. When one is happy, one feels free, with beautiful and attractive things around. Most people in this world are unhappy for a majority of their lives, with no real reason. The things that gave happiness changs over the time is a natural phenomenon. So people can not achive permenent happiness in this world. Even for a tempory happiness one's sound health is important. Health is the greast wealth for a person. Without good health one can not think of happiness. A person can be happy more frequantly if he can satisfied what he deserved to get or without over ambitious .
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Sep 18, 2010   #2
Various would be a good word here:
People from all walks of life try to achieve happiness through various methods.

The fact that things that give happiness change over the time is a natural phenomenon.

So people can not achieve permanent happiness in this world.

Even for a temporary happiness one's sound health is important. Health is the greatest wealth for a person. Without good health one can not think of happiness. A person can be happy more frequently if he can be satisfied what he deserved to get or without over ambitious . with what he has and not become overly ambitious.

This essay has a lot of wisdom!

Use a spell checker program! I corrected a lot of spelling errors. :-)


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