...getting valuable experience
s regarding
with working atmosphere(...)the payment
during working is unsuitable with theirof work is less than their expectation.
...choosing to break and get
ting a job(...)This
valuableprecious experience makes(...)more mature in facing
anytheir problem
they have and tend to be
wiselywiser (...)think out of the box during
in the working time
Aside from that, the salary they get from being employeea worker is not satisfied since they have a low-education qualification.
I think you need more explanation about this, since you put it as the merits of notion.