Why is health detector a leading initiative to help the poor easily access healthcare?

I'm convinced that the health detector is the top innovation for a variety of reasons. The health detector is an innovative device that can help many people, especially the poorest in areas with limited medical resources. Its low cost of around 10 dollars makes healthecares more accessible. The device provides immediate results, saves time and lives, and is lightweight and easy to carry, which is convenient for health workers. Importarntly, it does not require electricty, water, or special equipment, allowing tests to be performed directly in patients'home. This improves healthcare delivery is understand communities.

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The statement lacks substance. What is the product about? What does it do? How does it do it? What makes you say that it can be helpful to people? Vital information is missing from your presentation. It created a useless statement. It does not give the name of the product. It does not truly describe what the product does and how it does it. Why would the poor benefit from this product? Since it does not require a power source, what makes you say that the product can be used by just about anybody? The grammar is at a beginner level, the paragraph structure is okay. It just does not provide useful information so that made the presentation useless and irrelevant to the person reading it.