Have a health body is not an easy thing. There are many products which promise to get healthy body without do exercise or consume healthy food namely "superfood". Many people believe with consume superfood can make their body healthier and they think that although they have poor diet and low activities they still get healthy body.
In the Oxford Dictionary superfood means that "a nutrient-rich food considered to be especially beneficial for health and well-being". In the contrary, according to the expert from Canberra University Duane Mellor said that "superfood are marketing gimmicks". Marketing has a big influence to ensure the customer to use their products.They use famous celebrities which already has a slim and healthy body as their brand ambassador. But actually it is not enough to only consume superfood to meet our needs without enough intake from other foods. There are many foods which contains of complex nutrition and we can not change them with a tablet or a capsule which only made from the extract of the food. Superfood can not make people to get healthier body, so it is better to stop consume it.
Here is the links of the article newscientist.com/article/mg23130851-800-superfood-doesnt-mean-anything-so-lets-stop-using-it/
Greetings Mr. Farid Adwi. It is my pleasure to know you here,
In this opportunity, I would like to share the information related to your writing.
Have ,Having a health body is not an easy thing. FYI : When you want to put Primary Auxiliary Verb (like : have), you should change it into gerund,
Note: please avoid mistake in the first sentence,
There are many products which promise to get healthy body without do exercise or consume healthy food namely "superfood".
It is better for you to write it down like :
Many products which offer gaining body fit instantly are usually called "superfood".
Many people believe with consume superfood can make their body healthier and they think that although they have poor diet and low activities they still get healthy body .
probably like this : Many People believe that consuming superfood regularly will contribute on achieving healthier body even tough they have lack of diet programs and sport activities.
Note : Please avoid to repeat similar meaning in one sentence (refers to blue color).
That's all,
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I applied a few adjustments (mostly stylistic) to your text so that it sounds better. They are as follows:
Have [...] Having a healthy body is not an easy thing to accomplish.
which promise [...] that it is quite possible to have a healthy body, without having to lead a physically active lifestyle.
people believe [...] that by consuming some kind of 'superfood' they will be able to stay in shape. (the rest of the sentence is redundant).
In the Oxford Dictionary [...] defines 'superfood' as...
In the contrary [...] Quite to the contrary...
said that [...] no need for this.
has a big influence [...] on people's eating habits.
They use [...] Marketers usually exploit famous celebrities with super slim bodies to promote 'superfood'.
But actually [...] However...
many conventional types of food which [...] need to be consumed on a daily basis and we cannot...
Superfood [...] By eating 'superfood', people will not be able to become physically fit.
I hope this helped. Regards.
Hi, Mr Farid. Thank you for your feedback.
It's nice to know you from my post so I can visit the page of yours.
First, I would appreciate the topic you have choose; it is so interesting.
Yet, I come up with a note to compound another feedbacks so your text will sounds better.
IMHO, it is important for us to give more concern in conjuction and preposition .
I guess the remains of your necessary feedback have been given by ramzi06 and Wolf Larsen, so goodluck with your IELTS preparation. :)
hi...
Having a healthy body is not an easy thing.
Many people believetrust(believe is a general word) with consume superfood (...) and they thinksuppose that although they have ...
Important to give more concern in conjuction and preposition.
I suggest to using another words that similar. like belive, change, body, health
thank you
