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Help to writing an argumentative essay on globalization (beneficial or not)


caroltb 1 / 1  
May 11, 2011   #1
Globalization is the result of human innovation and technological progress. Many people view globalization in different ways. Some view it as a process that is beneficial, a process inevitable and irreversible nevertheless others view it as a big problem for the different cultures.

One important consideration is that many experts are worried because of the cultural globalization, because many people have been changing your lifestyles because of this. Another important consideration is that the numbers of people that go on fast foods are increasing.

On the one hand this increasing is good, because nowadays people don't have many time to do your own food, however on the other hand, fast foods are not good for health, because they presents serious health risks to its consumers, like obesity.

A further explanation is that Globalization can be looked at from different aspects, like economically, technologically, politically, culturally and environmentally, based on this information it's essential to conclude that despite the negative aspects of globalization (like the cultural globalization) she tend to be good in others aspects to.
m_imran_khar 1 / 4  
May 12, 2011   #2
Many people give viewsabout globalization in different ways
because many people have been changing their
because nowadays people don't have many time to do theiryour own food,

lifestyles because of this

it's essential to conclude that despite the negative aspects of globalization (like the cultural globalization) she tend to be good in others aspects to.

i don't know what you to deliver, do more practice
Ultimate csp 2 / 6  
May 12, 2011   #3
Globalization is the result of human innovations and technological progress. Many pP eople view globalization in different ways. Some view it as a process that is beneficial, a process inevitable and irreversible, nevertheless others view it as a big problem for the different cultures.
One important consideration is that, many experts are worried because of the cultural globalization, because many people have been changing yourtheir lifestyles because of thisit . Another important consideration is that, the numbers of people that goes on fast foods areis increasing.
On the one hand this increasing/enhancement is good, because nowadays people don't have many time to do yourtheir own food, however on the other hand, fast foods areis not good for health, because theyit presents serious health risks to its consumers, like obesity.
A further explanation is that Globalization can be looked at viewed from different aspects, like, economically, technologically, politically, culturally and environmentally,.B ased on this information it's essential to conclude that despite the negative aspects of globalization (like the cultural globalization) sheit tends to be good in others aspects too .

It is my humble concern and i am not an expert of it...
faisal 2 / 2  
May 12, 2011   #4
nice effort
You need to start with how globaliztions comes about and what actually it means. like through internet, fast modes of communication and open trade among all countries of world.

It may result in destroying specificities of different cultures, merging them and ultimate end will be one culture, one language, one style and even one thinking pattern over all the world...

Regards!
my opnion is not an expert opnion...
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
May 13, 2011   #5
One important consideration is that many experts are worried because of the cultural globalization because is causing many people to change their lifestyles. because of this .

Another important consideration is that the numbers of people that go on eat fast foods are increasing.

A further explanation is that Globalization can be looked at from different aspects, like economically, technologically, politically, culturally and--In this sentence, you capitalized globalization, but this word does not need to be capitalized. Also, I think you should replace the word aspects with the word perspectives. You do not look at something from an aspect; you look at it from a perspective.

:-)
OP caroltb 1 / 1  
May 13, 2011   #6
Thanks very very much.
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