You are way off tangent in trying to answer the prompt. You needed to pick a place, not an activity to describe in this essay. Don't describe the game that was being played. That is not of importance to this essay. If you feel content on the football field, then explain why. We are looking for a place, not an activity. How the game was played is irrelevant to this essay. If you wish to discuss the football field as the place where you feel most content, use the following sentence from your previous essay as the jumping off point for your revision:
Soccer makes me forget about all my anger, stress, anxiety, sadness and pain. It brings me into a place of happiness and all I can focus on is going head on against the goalie and goal. It is the place where I can be myself and not care for what other think of me. Every time, I have the ball in my possession, I feel that I am powerful and that times stop just for me.
- Add the word field after the word soccer in order to make this sentence completely address the essay prompt and then begin to explain the sense of contentment that you feel on soccer field. Soccer is just a sport being played. It is not relevant to the essay prompt. However, the soccer field, that is a real place where one may be able to achieve a sense of contentment. You can definitely discuss the soccer field in this essay.Try to revise the essay using my suggestions so that we can see if it is totally possible to use the soccer field as the reference point for this essay.