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IELTS TASK 1 - The hierarchical structure in a marketing company


madmoiselle 21 / 33 5  
May 6, 2016   #1
The hierarchical structure in a marketing company is depicted in the chart. Overall, there are eight people who hold a position in this company.

The highest position is Mr. Dobbs. He is the President and CEO of this marketing company. Mr. Dobbs possesses 3 main staffs that hold an important role in his business. The first is Mr. Fields, he is a Vice President of Marketing. Moreover, he has one subordinate that fills the position as a summer intern, he is Mr. Robbins.

The following main employees of Mr. Dobbs are Mr. Tremblay. He is a sales executive, who has two subordinates as sales managers. They are Mr. Smith and Mr. Namath. Then, the third is who fill the position as advertising executive, he is Mr. Gartner. In compared to Mr. Tremblay, Mr. Gartner only has one subordinate, wherein similar to Mr. Fields. She is Ms. Clack who occupy as an Advertising Manager.




radhiyah_fahra - / 4  
May 6, 2016   #2
Then, the third is who fill the position as advertising executive, he is Mr. Gartner.

She is Ms. Clack who occupies as an Advertising Manager.
tyler1234 3 / 10 2  
May 6, 2016   #3
The hierarchical structure in a marketing company is depicted in the chart. Overall, there are eight people who hold a position in this company.

The highest position is Mr. Dobbs . He is the President and CEO of this marketing company. Mr. Dobbs possesses 3 main staffs that hold an important role in his business. The first is Mr .

The following main employees of Mr. Dobbs areis Mr. Tremblay. He is a sales executive, who has...
Then, the third is who fill the position as advertising ...
In comparedcomparison to Mr. Tremblay, Mr. Gartner only has one subordinate, wherein similar to M.r Fields. She is Ms. Clack who occupyoccupies as an Advertising Manager.
OP madmoiselle 21 / 33 5  
May 6, 2016   #4
Hi Rara and Tyler thank you for your corrections :)
NourNour 22 / 39 7  
May 7, 2016   #5
1. Then, the third is who fills the position of anas advertising executive , he is Mr. Gartner.

2. In compared toby Mr. Tremblay,

3. Ms. Clack who occupiesthe position ofas an Advertising Manager.


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