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Should High school education be mandatory?



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Nov 27, 2024   #1
The debate on whether high school education should be mandatory or not revolves around its significance in shaping a student to overcome personal, professional and societal challenges. The earlier stage, primary education, is not enough to mould a student's life. Through high school, one can learn a lot of strategies and critical thinking abilities which are rarely taught earlier.
Firstly high school studies help individuals to understand the world in a broader sense, and calculate their daily lives in a much more disciplined way. If an individual pursues high school education he or she can be counted as a resourceful individual.
Moreover, a country where high school education is mandatory will flourish in manpower and its economy. A greater population will be saved from ignorance.
Although some people argue that high school education is not mandatory and can be replaced through alternate skill development. As the modern world looks out for skilled individuals the point be agreed. But we can also develop skills by educating them.
In conclusion, high school education is a dire need for all individuals. It can save a country from ignorance and build its economy. Moreover, it can help the personal lives of many individuals flourish.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15415  
Nov 28, 2024   #2
As a task 2 essay of only 200 words, you can expect to gain an automatic failing score for this essay. The cause of the failure will not be so much the discussion, as it is the percentage points deductions that will be applied for the missing 50 words. When the essay falls so short of the minimum 250 word count, there is no way it can gain a passing score since the preliminary TA score will already be a failing one. Then, if we add the other deductions for other scoring considerations, it will appear that the essay was never going to pass in the first place. If you do not write 250 words as a draft, and improve upon it by increasing the word count and quality of writing, then you should not expect to pass this test.


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