The high volume of traffic - the numbers of cars, motorbikes are increasing significantly

In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem

In contemporary life, air pollution acting as one of the most severe issues which is recently concerned by community mainly results from amount of commuter transportation. It is common knowledge that there are several reasons leading to this problem and we need to take action to reduce the harmful features.

To start with the origin of dense vehicles stream, thanks to the development of technology and machines, residents tend to misuse the private transportations. In fact, it is reported that there are at least one to two cars on average in a whole family, so that they cause traffic congestion in the rush hour. In addition, the high volume of traffic depends on the human need such as convenience, safety, so on. Citizens always want to have their own means to get to work or shopping easily, so private cars function as a fundamental requirement in their life. Therefore, the number of cars, motorbike are increasing significantly.

To handle this problem, governments had better to either boost the price of cars or encourage commuters to make use of communal transports like trains, buses. Furthermore, administration should raise spirit to walk for a while instead of travel by motorbikes which may be a chance to exercise and keep fit. Last but not least, it is certainly necessary to both construct , enlarge more roads, bridges to separate lane of heavy vehicle to diminish unpredictable accidents.

In conclusion, to lessen the high volume of traffic not only governments have to bring solution out but human also should think about the benefits of using public vehicles and limit utilisation of personal cars.

In your desire to immediately respond to the question, you changed the discussion topic from:

OT: In cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.

to

YT: air pollution acting as one of the most severe issues which is recently concerned by community

So you ended up changing the discussion slant in totality. Your response is not in alignment with the original prompt which will result in a failing TA score, which will contribute to the overall failure of your test due to evident lack of English comprehension skills. For this presentation, you always have to do the following in the first paragraph:

- Restate the prompt topic
- Give the reason for the discussion
- Offer a direct response to the questions or give reasons / causes / solutions are indicated by the original discussion instruction / questions

You failed to properly represent these in the first paragraph which is known as the prompt restatement. In fact, your statement about air pollution did not factor into the rest of the discussion aside from the first statement that you made, which really shows a disconnection between your understanding of the prompt and how it should be discussed. While your reasons and solutions relate to the original prompt, the mistake in the restatement may prove to be the reason why your score will be limited and possibly, not passing in this test.